it was pretty great to finally get feedback from someone other than my brilliant co_writer on the Lore Novel i’m writing.
there were indeed many changes requested to help the reader better sink their teeth into the whole story.
but I’ve come up with some pretty welcome changes to it all.
chapter 1 reads much better now and is a lot clearer. plus, I’ve managed to better profile some of the human characters in it.
for Chapter 3, I really like the fantastical magical beings from Romanian and Transylvanian folklore and how they are now represented inside the book.
the current chapter 3 will probably become chpaters 3 and 5, because there’s a lot of content inside at the moment, and it would also make more sense strictly from a story telling point of view.